Monday, September 21, 2009

revise to my bolg

Sherry is my partner today, and she hele me to work on my research question, thesis and my purpose.
My research questions will be what factors made fashion?
My thesis statment is fashion has developed for hundreds years, and it include designer, consumers and products.
Purpose: I and sherry disscust about what is purpose, and finally sherry is right, purpose is our perlimary goal to do our research, like why do we do this research. My purpsoe is analyizing the factors which influent fashion.
I helped her to add three aspects to reponse her research qusetion. The three aspect is education, technology and econmic, I think these three main points will help her to respones in specific fields.

1 comment:

rebeccalynnmedley said...

Excellent, Rick. I think you've done an excellent job refining your question, thesis, and purpose.

Nice work.