podcast

In my podcast, I will still talk about the fashion, however, in my porcast, I would like to change a little bit from my webtext. In the webtext, I talk about a lot about the brands history, their designer, quality,and customers. However, I think fashion is not only relate to the fashion brands, also relevent to the customer. In my webtext, I talk about some factors in the fashion, but I think I neglect one factor which is customers. So, in my podcast, I will stand on customers position to talk about fashion. In my podcast, I would like to insert a interview in my podcast. I will invite one of my friend, Zuyu Liu, to talk about fashion.
I will ask them about what they think about fashion, it means what the fashion defition in their mind.
If, there is a brand he need to choice from LV, Levis, CLOT, which one he choice? and why?
As a customer, what he think about is the most important in the fashion?
there are many factors in the fashion, like designers, quality, history, customers, do you think there are important to the fashion?
I will ask him about those questions, maybe more, and I will conclud what my opinion in the end.

In Mika's podcast, I hope she can focus on the issue, to let people know about the issue is important to the pharmacy. And what else is that how the patient could do if they find out there is a pharmacy problem.

In Delisa's podcast, I hope she can exphasize the change between the past pinup and today's. It is better to illustrate the distinguish by using podcast. What is the pinup change, why people perfer this one not the old one, that could be the good main point.

my website review.

In the conference with my professor, she help me to figure out my grammer problems. There are a lot of grammers in my text, like some pass tense, or I loss articles. What I think I need to care more about my grammer. Also I use the source from about. com which web site is not reliable. Moverover, I need to work on the connection between each paragraphs. The connection could make the article look like more flowly.
In Sharon comment, she give me very good advise which I think could improve my work. First she also point the About.com could not be source, and she suggest to use like Wbster's dictionary. I appricate she give me a good suggestiong to finding difintion. She mentioned that my thesis statement is not strong enough, I should promote my thesis may be change into Fashion has been developing for hundreds of years. During this time, fashion has been changing not only with the times, but with the new trends emerging as well. She said there are only citation in my texe, I need to put more in the text. Morever, I do not have recommonded reading for reader, so I need to add this in my work. There also is a link problem, my Lv source link do not work, so I need to relink it and make it right. I do not have background, so I should choose a background to fit my topic. There are some grammer mistakes and some sentences do not make sense so I have to work on it. And she said if I add a sub-heading, the information between each paragraphs will more clearly.
I totally agree with her comments which I think is help my text a lot

group work october 12

In my partner Sharon's work, she has a good title for it. I think it make sense, her title is Sensation-Seeking, and her artilce is follow her title. The size font and color is great, I can see the title very clearly. My partner put her name in the webtext where is under the title. She has good webtext chunk between each paragraphs. I think she use Calibri for her webtext. She has very good images whice can help with illurstate her concept. In her web-text, there are four heardings, and each one is meaningful, these headings make her article clearly and well-organize. She add 7 hyperlinks through her web-text, what I think her hyperlink is useful because there are more information about sensation seeking, so if people feel confuse in her concept, they could use the hyperlink to look for example. Sharon's thesis statement is her first sentence in her text. Her text is closely follow her thesis. She has topic sentences for each section,and each sentence can very clearly to explain what the concept come next. She has many sources, some come from books and some from google scholar.
In Sharon's work, she has logos, her text is logical connection with good concepts. There is no ethos and pathos in her work, because she did not put her personal opinion and emotion in her text.
What I think is Sharon has a very nice work!

summarize and respond

I look for the article talk about the fashion brands characteristics. There are the article I summarize.

In Lv's article said that since from 19th century, LV's products were made by hand. For example, like the LV's trunk, the craftman arrange the leather and canvas, trapping in the tiny nails one by one to make sure the any five-letter solid pick-proof lock has an individual handmade key. This device make traveler to have only one key for their luggage. The trunk are made of 30-years-old poplar tree which was needed to dry for at least fours years.

From this article, I understand what the factor make Lv to be a top brand in the world-the quality. Lv kept their high-quality from hundred years ago. Lv gave up their production efficent but in order for their quality. I think that is the reason why Lv could develope to a top brand.

In CLOT's article said that the CLOT is a new brand which represent a new culture. This brand always cross cooperate with some famous brands like LV, Levis, Nike and so on. They re-design these brands old product with new printed. People who tired for the design from these brands would like to buy CLOT. However, CLOT has to use coopration to build their credit, and this brand need to produce something belong to their own style.

I read this article from a fashion magazine. I thinks this article is very objective. The advantage of Clot is new desgin. Their products totally overthrow the old pattern from others brands. People who like accpect new fashion would like this brand. But what I think is their production is base on what other brands made, and Clot should developed their own style without others productions.

These articles help me to find a common thing among the fashion brands. I am thinking about the fashion brands factors which can attract people to buy. I think quality is an important aspect to build credit from customers. Therefore, their customers will expand to more and more people. And the fashion brands were developed by their customers. Fashion is kind of the new things, so people who pursue fashion seem likely accept the new degsin. So the fashion brands need to keep producing new design products in order to attract people buy their products.
Reference
Martin, Richard (1995). Contemporary fashion. London: St. James Press. pp. 750.

group work

In today’s group work, I work with Robot. I read his article which is Designer Babies. I followed the instructions which look for main idea. And this is the main idea what I think.
The designer babies call for people’s argument about ethical issue. Some people think this technique will avoid diseases and support this technique. But some people disagree with this technique and think this technique will cause big issue in the future and should prohibits by laws.
I talk with Robot, he agrees with my main idea which he thinks is pretty similar with his.

The paraphrases I have read form the guideline from the web-site. I and Robot’s paraphrases are similar but I think his is better than me because his is briefer.
The twenties were the years that America becomes totally different with past. Drinking was limited by the laws what people couldn’t understand. Crimes was increasing, however polices can stop it. Classical music was abandoned by people because Jazz took the place, and young started to admire the men like Bix Beiderbecke, Louis Armstrong, and Count Basie. Flapper was the fashion which brought bobbed hair and short skirts in twenties.
Compare to the example that given in the web-site, I think my paraphrase is plagiarized version.
Reference
Yancey, K. (1989) English 102 Supplemental Guide. (25th Ed.)

group work

In today's class. I and Sharon talk about the hypolink, and we feel confuse about what information we need to hypolink. Rebecaa give us good suggestions, like I can hypolink the brand name to the offical web-site, also I can hypolink about Edison Chen, I wonder about I can link to his personal blogger so that people can know more about him. Moreover, I know about we need to form our web-text to single chunk, and single space between each chunk.

apply the infromation in reading to writing.

In my opinion, there is a close connection between reading and writing. When we want to write something, we need to read first. Like in this semaster, we do research base on our topic, and our souces is almost come from what we read, either online or book. Therefore, in our writing, we need the information from our reading. Reading can help us to focus on our organization. We need to pick the useful information out, and sometimes, these information form our outline, or make our writing clear. Reading can improve our writing skills. We read more, the more we can write. Reading can directly provide us information, and then we make these information to our content. Also, reading more good articles can help us to remember more glossary, and you can remember the glossary combine with your reading. Reading also can improve our sentences' structure. Like I am international students, and English is my second language, so I need to get rid off my Chinese grammer to write in English. However, I always struggle in sentence's structure. I overcome this problem by finish reading a novel which named sold. I thought my grammer have improved a lot after done much reading. So in my opinion, reading can improve our writing, and also reading is the content of our writing. Read more, write better!