group work

In today’s group work, I work with Robot. I read his article which is Designer Babies. I followed the instructions which look for main idea. And this is the main idea what I think.
The designer babies call for people’s argument about ethical issue. Some people think this technique will avoid diseases and support this technique. But some people disagree with this technique and think this technique will cause big issue in the future and should prohibits by laws.
I talk with Robot, he agrees with my main idea which he thinks is pretty similar with his.

The paraphrases I have read form the guideline from the web-site. I and Robot’s paraphrases are similar but I think his is better than me because his is briefer.
The twenties were the years that America becomes totally different with past. Drinking was limited by the laws what people couldn’t understand. Crimes was increasing, however polices can stop it. Classical music was abandoned by people because Jazz took the place, and young started to admire the men like Bix Beiderbecke, Louis Armstrong, and Count Basie. Flapper was the fashion which brought bobbed hair and short skirts in twenties.
Compare to the example that given in the web-site, I think my paraphrase is plagiarized version.
Reference
Yancey, K. (1989) English 102 Supplemental Guide. (25th Ed.)